Monday, October 3, 2011

Live Blog #1

Author: please write your revised thesis statement.
Class: what is good about the thesis statement? What still might need some work?
Author: revise and repost your statement, using comments and suggestions from the class as guidance.

20 comments:

  1. Jon Krakaure conveys the idea that individualism is both harmful and useful by following the life of Chris McCandless as he treks across the United States.

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  2. Individualism is shown to be a good characteristic to have but can danger a person if they go out alone and are unprepared.

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  3. In Into the Wild, an individualistic way of life leads Christopher McCandless into isolation because of his excessive pride, and ignorance, as evidenced by his refusal to accept anything from anyone and hatred of the average American's priorities.

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  4. Krakaur uses Chris McCandless reckless search for independence, fall to madness, as well as his eventual serenity found only in his downfall, to show that the search for individualism can turn deadly if the desire is not tempered and one finds themselves isolated, as seen in the case of McCandless.

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  5. Individualism allows Mortenson to accomplish his dreams by giving him confidence, allowing him to be independent, and attracting support for his cause.

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  6. By using the experiences of himself and McCandless, Krakauer shows that although the concept of individualism is appealing, when allowed to take over your life, your very essence may be overcome by the isolation.

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  7. Greg Mortenson, in pursuing his dream of building schools in Pakistan, reveals the power of the individual, despite the obstacles he faces along the way.

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  8. In the novel, "Into the Wild" by Jon Krakaure, Krakaure portrays individualism as a beacon lighting the path to freedom, or a tool of destruction if abused.

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  9. Jon Krakauer demonstrates the importance of searching for internal happiness and individualism, but the dangers that can arise in the process.

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  10. Greg Mortensen is a strong individualist who believes in the children of packistans goals and has gone to the extreme to help the kids have their dreams come true and achieve what was originally thought as unthinkable

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  11. Although individualism may be endangering, as demonstrated by Mortenson's kidnapping in Waziristan, it can also be beneficial, as seen when he discovers Korphe and eventually builds a school.

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  12. Though individualism has advantages and disadvantages, Mortensen's idea of individualism, that he has to do what he can for those in need, teaches him to build better relationships, by learning a new culture from the locals in Pakistan and Afghanistan, and to try till one succeeds in their mission.

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  13. In Three Cups of Tea by Greg Mortensen and David Oliver Rein,they suggest that individualism is found in the power of helping others through their successes and their failures and through happiness.

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  14. Conveyed through his defense of Chris McCandless' actions and the interviews he decides to put in the book, it is apparent that Krakauer's message on individualism is that it is always important to be and individual even though it may be deadly.

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  15. As Krakauer examines the spiritual evolution of individuals (such as McCandless) who have explored lives of isolation, anonymity,and complete individualism, he testifies that individualism tests one's soul to seek the bare core of human capabilities without any material burdens.

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  16. Jon Krakaura explains in the novel "Into the Wild" that if individualism is taken to the extremes, it can be dangerous because it lead a person to refusing and ignoring necessary devices of life.

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  17. Mortenson depicts the idea that individualism can be achieved by one's optimism and it won't be an easy progress to achieve individualism.

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  18. The story Into the Wild has shown the individualism by the detailed wild living and travels of Chris McCandless, also it has showed to the readers that to live in the world, we do not have to be strong, but have to feel strong in living.

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  19. Jon Krakaure explains in the novel "In to The Wild",that when individualism is taken to the extremes it lead a person to reject and ignore necessary devices in life. As a result of this it can be dangerous for an individuals' life.

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  20. In the book Into the wild Krakaure shows that the pursuit of individualism is natural but, going as far as completely isolating yourself often ends with a fatal outcome. like the one McCandless faced

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